Student Writing Gallery!

This year, we are publishing a featured piece of student writing every month on the 26th. Each piece will be accompanied by an original illustration.

Ode to Writing

Written by the Community at the OMNIBUS X Release Celebration

Words are daily dishes, breakfast lunch and dinner
Make you feel like a winner
Words smell like dusty books pages, the inside of a pencil sharpener, and nasty baloney
Words are like popcorn
Some of them have butter and some of them don’t
Words are like gummy bears
chewy, hard, squishy, mushy, sweet, and sour
Writing smells like chocolate, fresh wood, coffee, fresh air, fresh ideas, paper, and delicious buttermilk
And that’s what makes it smell delicious
Our writing comes from memories, experiences, feelings, and our imaginations
Words can be a healing spell or a chain saw
Whether they are blustery or bulbous or supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
They can inspire people, help us organize our thoughts, express ourselves and create with a flourish
When I write I feel like I’m in another word fantasy world where words taste big, juicy, crispy, sweet and sour
And special like an awesome holiday
Writing is a line
A portal to a new world
When I write I imagine how big this will all grow
When you write about nature there is a plethora of smells—pinecones, apples, crunchy leaves, fresh air
I write when I am imagining something superb
Writing is another form of expression
Writing is like exploring the world
Writing rhyming words like hop and pop
Seeing words that make sense
When words are interesting they make you express your mind and feelings with imagination
Writing is calming like a symphony
Like reading or painting
Like exploring and wondering
I write to be heard; words are like bricks.

Illustration by Ingrid Ankersonankerson.com

Silverstone

Maya S., Age 9

weE-Bots on Liberty St.

Once upon a time in a cave filled with rubies lived a dragon named Silverstone. He always loved to shoot ice out of his eyes and burn them with his fire. He had a bossy older sister. Good thing she lived far away in a cave filled with bats (mom made that choice!).

Illustration by Ingrid Ankersonankerson.com

The Fight for Enders Edge

Ognian V., Age 12

Liberty Street Tutoring in Ann Arbor

My island would be in the shape of a circle. It has a jungle, swamp, something unknown hidden behind walls, a volcano, a brand-new military base with all kinds of guns, technology, and vaults . . . There are pink trees, grass, bushes, rideable snake beasts (ten feet tall, snake tail, two arms, chest, snake’s head, two horns, white and silver colors), Gorillazilla (twelve feet tall, albino gorilla), swooping evils, Megalodons, and the legendary beast that lives in the volcano the “Fire Demon” (one hundred feet tall, one thousand feet long, fire kaiju with mystical fire powers, armor scarred by the victims who dared fight the Fire Demon).

Background Info

This used to be the island called “Enders Edge.” It was never seen until the military found it so they built the base there. But a magic Turbo energy . . . thing was found in the woods and the thing tried to kill the new inhabitants so the military decided to cage this thing and so they did. But what they did not know was that the Turbo creature was looking for shelter from its cousin nemesis. When the military found the other Turbo creature, they threw it in with the first one, so FG9XB5 (the first Turbo creature) was left alone with BX13YZ (the second Turbo creature). One day, BX13YZ transformed into the Fire Demon and escaped the cage and started hunting for the military’s men and women. It killed a lot of people, but a lot of people also escaped leaving their base shiny and new. And for the next five hundred million years it slept but now is awakened by three inhabitants . . . you and your two friends.

Now, it’s up to you and your friends to find FG9XB5 and merge with him to get amazing super-powers and defeat BX13YZ from terrorizing Enders Edge and all of earth . . .

(Voice message plays) “I’m BX13YZ or you can call me Fire Demon. I am here to consume Enders Edge and the world so I can return with my Master Thanos, the titan of worlds, and once I do well, eat all the galaxies and recreate one big world with us in charge (me and Thanos) and everyone else would be our slaves. Now if you’ll excuse me I have to go feast on Enders Edge and the rest of the world. (Voice message cut) (Unknown voice says) “You heard that right . . . Well go on, explore and get FG9XB5, you’ll need him.”

Illustration by Ingrid Ankerson

An Elephant at The Arcade

Edwin J.

Mallets Creek Library Family Writing Lab, Summer 2018


The elephant with a cold is growing mold. Sick and sad. Cold and mad at his arcade. A burnt pie to try, makes the elephant cry, just one tear in his eye. The trunk up front, the tail set sail playing games in his arcade. A customer, oh what joy. It was awesome, finally fun. Time to entertain . . . With a cold and a sore thumb. The elephant presented a burnt offering. The customer, a tissue. The elephant, grateful, sneezed a big AACHOOO.

Artwork by Jen Harley, jenharley.com

 

We are From

Malik H., 13
Family Writing Lab at the Elmwood Park Branch of the Detroit Public Library

We’re from my cat
from dish soap and wipes
We are from the Chinese writing
From the cold of the AC
We are from the sunflowers
The oak tree whose long gone limbs I remember as if they were my own.

We’re from Christmas parties and staying up late
from Melika and Earl
We are from joking a lot and watching funny videos.

We’re from knowing the difference between right and wrong
We are from barbecues at the park or at the house
We are from Detroit and we are African-American
From me and my cousins torturing our older cousin
From my dad with all the muscles
From PS4 and money in my pockets.

Artwork by Jen Harley, jenharley.com

Candy’s New Paris: Out of this World

Ms. Herrin’s Fifth-grade Class

Erickson Elementary, Ypsilanti

Next-Flix Field Trip

Artwork by Jen Harley, jenharley.com

ACT I INT. PEACH TREE HOUSE ON MARS

CANDY (a teenage girl), MELLY (her best friend) and STRAWBERRY (a real strawberry with powers) are sitting together studying Geometry in a cozy peach tree house in New Paris, Mars.

MELLY
OMG, this is hard!

CANDY
(to MELLY)
Calm down! You’re overreacting; I’ll help you.

STRAWBERRY
(to MELLY)
Your breath is so hot; it’s hotter than the sun!

MELLY crumples up her paper, throws it up into the air, and burns it up. Everyone rolls their eyes.

MELLY
I’m HUNGRY!
(to STRAWBERRY)
Can I have a piece of you?

At the mention of being eaten, STRAWBERRY fizzles up, explodes, and the comes back together. More eye rolling ensues.

MELLY
OK, that was a bad idea. Let’s go get something to eat!

They exit the tree house and go out into New Paris, Mars, to go to their favorite place to eat.

ACT II EXT. MARS

They head to the Dairy Queen, exploring New Paris on their way.

MELLY
Let’s go to Dairy Queen. I heard there was new ice cream. What’s your favorite flavor?

CANDY
Sure. Let’s go get ice cream. My favorite flavor is chocolate.

STRAWBERRY
I like strawberry. Wait a minute. Wait a minute. Do you have money, Melly?

MELLY
No. I’m broke. I spent my money on psychic stuff.

CANDY
I’m broke. I’m saving for college.

STRAWBERRY
I don’t have any money. I left it on Earth.

MELLY becomes angry because STRAWBERRY left her money on Earth. She breathes a little ball of fire.

MELLY
Grrrrr. Why on earth would you leave money on Earth?

Strawberry explodes covering everybody in strawberry.

CANDY
Calm down. It’s just money.

MELLY
(to STRAWBERRY)
Now we can’t buy food.

CANDY
Let’s think of a way to make some money.

ACT III EXT. PARK

CANDY, STRAWBERRY, and MELLY are brainstorming ideas at a park called Mars Park. It has slides, stairs, and a petting zoo with pandas, monkeys, and lions. There is a food truck.

MELLY
We need to get money. Let’s have a yard sale!

CANDY
What are you going to sell? That’s a bad idea. We can do a musical for little kids!

STRAWBERRY
No. That’s really bad. I don’t know how to sing or do any of that. Let’s have a roast battle!

MELLY
That could be a disaster! If someone roasts me, I might accidentally breathe fire.

CANDY
That’s true. You do get mad easily. Oh, I know! Let’s have a talent show!

MELLY
That’s actually a really good idea.

STRAWBERRY
How can we set it up? How can we get people to come?

MELLY
We can bring our cousins, best friends, mom and dad, aunties, nieces, uncles. . .

CANDY
OK, OK. We get it! We’ll bring our family.

STRAWBERRY
In the show, I’ll roast people.

MELLY
I’ll do some fire tricks.

CANDY
(excitedly)
Ooh, I can dance.

STRAWBERRY
(nicely)
Well. . . sorry. . . you can’t dance. Maybe another time.

CANDY
OMG! You guys are just trying to hog the stage! I came up with this idea! I deserve to be on state, too.

MELLY
OK, Candy. We can come up with a different idea for you.

CANDY
Well, I want to dance! Can I dance with you all?

STRAWBERRY
Why do you want to dance so much?

CANDY
My grandma was a dancer. I want to dance like her. Plus, Brandon really likes dancing.

MELLY
Poor Brandon!

STRAWBERRY
Ooh, Candy has a crush.

MELLY
Candy, I’m just going to break this easy to you. You should not dance in front of Brandon.

CANDY
So I can’t dance? What else am I supposed to do? I don’t have powers.

CANDY gets red-faced, balls up her fists, and runs away.

INT. PEACH TREE HOUSE

CANDY is sitting in a corner with a pillow. MELLY and STRAWBERRY come in.

MELLY
What’s wrong, Candy?

CANDY
You guys don’t understand my life.

STRAWBERRY
Well, we’re your best friends. You can tell us how your life is going.

CANDY
(Lifting her head off the pillow)
I wish I had super powers like you guys.

MELLY
Why didn’t you tell us this before?

CANDY
I was embarrassed.

STRAWBERRY
You don’t need powers! You’re really smart!

MELLY
Yeah, you’re way better at Geometry.

STRAWBERRY
Ooh, Melly, your breath so hot you melt my ice cream.

MELLY
(laughing)
Don’t start, Strawberry.

CANDY laughs.

CANDY
Thanks. You guys are like sisters to me.

ACT IV EXT. ON THE STREET LEADING TO CANDY’S HOUSE

Walking toward the backyard of CANDY’s house.

STRAWBERRY
(to MELLY)
What if we let Candy do the show, but people don’t like it because she doesn’t have any powers.

CANDY
(Screaming angrily to STRAWBERRY)
I can’t take this anymore! I want superpowers too!

MELLY
(Pensively to CANDY)
I think I might know a way to get you powers.

CANDY
(to MELLY)
How!

MELLY
(to CANDY)
I was using my psychic abilities to look into the future, and I think that I saw a way for you to have powers.

MELLY creates a small portal in front of her, and reaches into it, pulling out a very impressive looking sword.

MELLY
(Handing the sword to CANDY)
Here’s a sword that you can use in the show, but I don’t know how to use it.

STRAWBERRY
(to CANDY and MELLY)
Don’t worry, I know how to do sword tricks, and I can teach you.

The three friends continue walking down the street and enter CANDY’S backyard

Scene 2 — CANDY’S backyard — late afternoon

STRAWBERRY is teaching CANDY how to do tricks with the sword

STRAWBERRY
(to CANDY)
Keep your stance wide, and keep body lowered.

CANDY
I am, and I think I am at least getting better.

STRAWBERRY
(Hesitantly)
Sure. . . At least a little better.

CANDY
(Excitedly)
Can I be in the talent show now!?

MELLY
Uhm, yeah you can if you really want to, but only if you promise to practice as much as you can on your way there.

CANDY
OK!

STRAWBERRY and MELLY walk towards the talent show stage with CANDY trailing along behind them practicing with the sword some more.

ACT V — INT — TALENT SHOW

CANDY
(On Stage — To Audience)
Well, hiiii. I’m going to be showing my newly revealed talent that I like to do.

Candy closes her eyes and imagines the slime and then squirt the alien slime out of her hands. There is so much slime. There is blue slime. Rainbow slime. Foamy slime. The crowd goes wild.

CROWD
(Clapping and whistling)
WOW! AMAZING! LOOK AT ALL THAT SLIME!

CANDY
(smiles and bows)
Thank you, Thank you.

CANDY exits the stage and Strawberry gets on the stage.

STRAWBERRY
Them shoes are so old they might get somebody sick.

CROWD
OOOOOHHHHHH

STRAWBERRY
Yeah, I’m talking about you with your dusty rusty shoes.

CROWD
AHHHHHH

STRAWBERRY
Your teeth are yellow.

CROWD
OOHHHHHHHH

STRAWBERRY
It looks like you colored your teeth with a yellow crayon.

STRAWBERRY bows and the crowd starts clapping and laughing. Some seem skeptical of the roasting. STRAWBERRY exits the stage.

TALENT SHOW HEAD
And the winners are Candy and Strawberry! Come collect your winnings!

ACT V — SCENE 2 — INT. HAUNTED TREE HOUSE

CANDY, MELLY, and STRAWBERRY are eating pizza from Dominoes.

MELLY
Hey Candy, please pass the pizza sauce.

A monkey from outside throws a banana into the tree house window and it hits the pizza sauce.

MELLY
(Screaming)
What was that?

All three look up and see the monkey outside the window. MELLY breathes fire at the monkey and it throws another banana at her. All three try to leave the tree house but it’s suddenly locked!

CANDY
I can try to make a slime key for this door?

CANDY tries to make a key to leave the tree house but it doesn’t work and the three of them don’t know what to do. We’ll have to explore more next time.

TO BE CONTINUED. . .

Grab Your Skates

Kaiya H.
Age 9
Family Writing Lab at Holmes Elementary, April 2018

What would you put in the Ypsilanti time capsule?
Pair of skates.

What do you want this to teach people about your life in Ypsilanti?
If you are losing your composure, just grab your skates and roll on!

 

Artwork by Jen Harley, jenharley.com

My Favorite Place in Detroit

By Jeremiah J.
Age 8
Detroit After-school Tutoring

My favorite place is the Little Caesars Arena because you get to get food and see basketball and see your favorite team. You can be happy that your team won. You get to buy things like basketball team shirts, basketball team shoes, and say hi to your favorite basketball team players. My favorite team is the Pistons, and my favorite player is Andre.

Inside, it sounds wonderful—loud! And quiet (when they are playing basketball, everybody is quiet until they make a score).

It looks cool. What I see when I’m there is that my team is trying to win a game. What I see when I’m about to go to a game is pictures of back in the day when they used to play basketball, especially the shoes they had.

They let us see the mascot. The mascot’s name is Hooper because he hoops. Hooper is a horse.

Artwork by Jen Harley, jenharley.com

Hot Dog Man!

By Unique B.
Age 12
Estabrook Writers Club

Introduction/Chapter 1:

“Auuuu, I ate too much hot dogs at once. I’ll eat some more later when my stomach starts to digest,” said James as his belly started to growl.

Sorry, didn’t see you there, you’re probably wondering why I’m eating all these hot dogs. Well, let me tell you one thing about me. I love, love, love hot dogs. I would die for them. I lose my mind if I don’t get to have a dozen a day. You’re also probably wondering why I’m at the bottom of Lake Huron and can barely see anything. Well, don’t get freaked out, but I’m a fifteen-year-old vampire. No, no, no, I’m not going to eatcha. I like hot dogs! I don’t know how to do anything except for eat and look for hot dogs.

Well, anyway, this is the story of how James Brown had to come up to shore.

Chapter 2: The Incident?!

“Once again, too much hot dogs,” James mumbled, as I went to go get another hot dog. As soon as I opened the refrigerator, I had a look in my eyes that made me want to scream. I started to twitch like I was mad, then blurted out—-“I’M OUT OF HOT DOGS!!!”

I looked like I was going to blow. I didn’t know what to do. Then, I wondered something: “I’ve always wanted to know what was up there on land. I then got a smile on my face, my grin grew bigger, and I started to blush. “Oh silly me, I could just go up there and see if they have any hot dogs, and if they do, I’ll get some! If they don’t, I’ll be in bad luck for the rest of my life.” I got up and started stuffing as much clothes as I could for my trip, but the most important thing that I needed that I forgot was an umbrella.

Chapter 3:

After twenty-four hours of swimming up from Lake Huron, I finally got up on shore. The sand was soft underneath my feet and the sun was shining bright. I found an umbrella where someone was sleeping and grabbed it because my skin was starting to fall off. It was very flaky from the sun and brownish. It looked disgusting! After I walked about a mile away from the shore, I saw a giant hot dog that was bigger than me. When I walked in the store, I couldn’t believe my eyes! There were a bunch of hot dogs sitting on a rack that looked good and juicy. I picked one of the hot dogs up, took a bite, and it was love at first sight. I didn’t even notice myself putting a whole bunch of hot dogs in my suitcase. Just when I finished my hot dog and was walking out the door, suddenly—-“Hey! Where do you think you’re going with those hot dogs, huh?”

To be continued . . .

Artwork by Jen Harley, jenharley.com

Life Doesn’t Bother Me At All Either

Claire Baker
Age 8
Oxford Virtual Academy
Wee-Bots at Redford – Detroit Public Library

Looking at the door pacing
on the wood floor. Scared to go
out and tell the truth.
Life does not bother me at all.
Having big kids pick on me.
Life doesn’t bother me at all.
Parachuting from a plane.
Life doesn’t bother me at all.

Artwork by Jen Harley, jenharley.com

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